Like many other writers, I spent a few years teaching
writing, among other subjects, to people of all ages--college students on up to
retired folks and occasionally middle and high school students in weekend
workshops. Each class was different, but I relied on several favorite writing
exercises to get students writing. I still find myself thinking of them when I face
a particular challenge in a manuscript. Here are a few I think are worth
trying, no matter where you are in your career.
First, write one descriptive paragraph for each of three
people: someone you know very well; someone you have seen in the neighborhood
but have never met; and someone you make up.
Second, write a three-page dialogue of two people meeting
for lunch, or a coffee break. One is unhappy with his/her job, and the other is
satisfied with work.
Third, what is a zipper and how does it work?
Fourth, write the opening page of a short story or novel
from the point of view of each of the main characters in the story.
Fifth, if you are a woman, describe your Saturday morning as
if you were a man. If you are a man, describe your Saturday morning as if you
were a woman.
Sixth, write about things that are silver.
In each exercise, the writer is challenged to observe and
record, to think through a specific behavior or incident. In a good story,
there is no room for anything vague or unclear, and the greater specificity or
detail, the more compelling and involving the narrative.
In For the Love of
Parvati, the third Anita Ray mystery, I open with a scene of peril, a man
tied under a bridge in a rural area, with the monsoon raging and a river
starting to flood. The idea came from an effort to describe a bridge I encountered and how
unstable parts of it had become over the decades while other parts looked as
sturdy as the day they were constructed. I liked the contrast, and out of that
came the opening scene.
In the second Anita Ray book, The Wrath of Shiva, Anita has several conversations with people she
is trying to get information from. The key to a strong dialogue is creating the
tension between two people who have different goals. Anita goes from store to
store, and her goals clash with each storekeeper's.
In the first Anita Ray, Under
the Eye of Kali, the opening scene at a breakfast table introduces several
women, some of whom I imagined and others whom I had seen in the States or in
India. Only the waiter is real.
Readers pick up a book looking for an experience, and it is
the writer's job to create that experience, that journey into another world.
These exercises are steps on creating that journey.
7 comments:
Good points. I often find after finishing a piece [short story or novel] that it has been written from the wrong POV. Changing it is such a pain but it only becomes obvious on completion.
I'm learning that lesson now, Madeline. I'm rewriting a Mellingham mystery, but I like the new version so much better than the original that I don't mind the extra work. Thanks for commenting.
Hi, Susan,
Writing exercises are great for students and teachers alike. One I like is taking a poem and turning it into a short story and vice versa. I've also taken short stories and turned them into short plays and vice versa.
HI, Jacquie, I love the idea of turning a poem into a story. I may borrow that idea and give it a try. Of course, turning a short story into a play is a great idea, but I've never done that. Thanks for the suggestions, and for commenting.
What great suggestions! I'm tempted to start trying a couple of them now--but need to get back to editing my manuscript. I sure will keep them.
Susan: I hope you don't mind my pirating your ideas. I facilitate a group and am always looking for ways to push them further and challenge them. I'm going to use some of your prompts. Thanks for the helpful post!
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